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Hmm ... somehow this does not convince me, and that's why: If I'm not wrong, there is a falloff in sharpness from the first car to the second. This would be appropriate, because the second is behind, but then: the second is bigger. Then there is the text. It's sharpest of all, but it is completely in the back, as it is partially hidden.
I know that you know all that and most likely had an intention in making it that way, but I didn't get the message. Could be me, but as nobody of the usual suspects comments either, I guess this could be a shared problem.
In general I like the idea, I like the colors, I like the pyramid structure, I am only not sure how to fix what irritates me. Maybe blurring the yellow car a little more would increase the effect of the wrong depth information in the text to a point where it would not look wrong any more?
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Hmm ... somehow this does not convince me, and that's why: If I'm not wrong, there is a falloff in sharpness from the first car to the second. This would be appropriate, because the second is behind, but then: the second is bigger. Then there is the text. It's sharpest of all, but it is completely in the back, as it is partially hidden.
I know that you know all that and most likely had an intention in making it that way, but I didn't get the message. Could be me, but as nobody of the usual suspects comments either, I guess this could be a shared problem.
In general I like the idea, I like the colors, I like the pyramid structure, I am only not sure how to fix what irritates me. Maybe blurring the yellow car a little more would increase the effect of the wrong depth information in the text to a point where it would not look wrong any more?
Anything with cars from the 30s-50s is cool!
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