tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34175158.post1285417374508123551..comments2023-09-26T10:38:35.085-04:00Comments on ImageFiction: ThreesomeTedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07869579042505598957noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34175158.post-28102106082914851672008-01-21T13:09:00.000-05:002008-01-21T13:09:00.000-05:00Oh, I didn't say friendly. I know where you're hea...Oh, I didn't say friendly. I know where you're heading, it just does not convince me. Through all the mastership in your execution remains a certain artificiality. This still looks fabricated, and it is not you, it is the material. I can't see how anybody could do it better. I've tried, but my own solution produces as much problems as it solves.<BR/><BR/>Of course I can construct a story that Andreashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15992874945092411553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34175158.post-17590428672833052192008-01-21T10:36:00.000-05:002008-01-21T10:36:00.000-05:00Hmmmm... are you missing the fact that relationshi...Hmmmm... are you missing the fact that relationships are exposed in body and facial language. If there is a relationship here, need it be friendly? Might it be frosty? And could the boy's smirk explain the girl's tense facial muscles? Or vice versa? <BR/><BR/>Plus there's another key detail to this story that leaps out to me... And not one that I added. <BR/><BR/>Not all endings are happy. But Tedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07869579042505598957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34175158.post-16399622558357572112008-01-21T08:31:00.000-05:002008-01-21T08:31:00.000-05:00Ted,You see me heartily laughing! Yes, this is def...Ted,<BR/><BR/>You see me heartily laughing! Yes, this is definitely something that nobody has ever shot before :))<BR/><BR/>Nice idea and very well done. It's still a little hampered for me by the fact that the woman in the back is so entirely unrelated to the guy. I have tried to flip her horizontally, making her look at the man, and to make this more convincing I have taken the eyes from the Andreashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15992874945092411553noreply@blogger.com